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Tuesday, 18 March 2014
Short Sensory Recount
I was learning to reflect what I felt out side in the sensory garden.
One thing I did well was describing lots of things there were. One thing I could
do better is try to do better spelling. Overall I thought it was an interesting activity.
2 comments:
Anonymous
said...
Eden I have looked over your recount paragraph. You will need to look at it and see where you should have edited. This will help you when you go to publish something else online.
Your recount is very descriptive and used figurative language to make it more interesting. Keep up the excellent effort with this. You can use these language features in your other work.
2 comments:
Eden I have looked over your recount paragraph. You will need to look at it and see where you should have edited. This will help you when you go to publish something else online.
Your recount is very descriptive and used figurative language to make it more interesting. Keep up the excellent effort with this. You can use these language features in your other work.
Well Done Eden. I think you could clean up your editing
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