Tuesday, 25 March 2014

Here Dead We Lie Poem



I was learning to do Here dead we lie poem.  I found this work tricky and confusing.
The one thing I did well was answering all the questions.  One thing I could do better
is finding more facts and doing more things in.   Overall I thought I did well.











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3 comments:

Anonymous said...

I love how you've put your best into writing this response and I love how you have added lots of cool
pictures!

Eden W

27 March 2014 at 11:22
Anonymous said...

I love how you've put your hard work into this
work and I also love how you added cool pictures


Eden W

27 March 2014 at 11:25
Anonymous said...

Well done with this poem Eden. I have put my comments on the document.

You will get better at answering the questions fully.

Keep up the good effort with your comprehension.

6 April 2014 at 15:53

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